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ckchowov
03-16-2007, 03:51 PM
Okay...pls criticize:(
http://org22.zorpia.com/0/2877/18416363.00008e.jpg
alancheong7
03-16-2007, 04:18 PM
Sigh .... it's beautiful and I wish I could take shots like these.
Why's the bottom right corner fuzzy compared to the bottom left?
ShaolinTiger
03-16-2007, 04:21 PM
I find the horizon a little tilted and the overall tone too redish for my taste, even though the explosions are red...it seems to have rendered everything red.
Nice moment though.
ckchowov
03-17-2007, 08:28 AM
alan -- fuzzy ? May be due to my poor distortion correction. ST -- yeap, the red is too 'strong'. Wokay! thanks for the constructive critism !
Gojira
03-17-2007, 01:28 PM
Exposure a bit too long perhaps? Made the fireworks at the bottom seem more like sprays of fire....too much of a good thing.
I agree with ST on the horizon tilt...but other than that, it's a good capture!
ckchowov
03-19-2007, 07:52 AM
OK ! thanks Gojira !
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