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draeger
05-28-2007, 07:18 PM
http://www.pbase.com/draegermd/image/79479614.jpg
He seems to be praying in front of an altar. Maybe you should have included a bit of the altar? Or is there no altar?
A part from that, I find the bit above his head distracting. You should crop it away.
alancheong7
05-29-2007, 09:36 AM
I like it, the play of light, shadows, detail.
Looks like sharpest point is his neck. How is the light coming from top right?
Alan's suggestion emphasises focus on the boy, which is good.
Were you able to get a slightly more frontal shot?
qqmeng
05-29-2007, 09:38 AM
compo aside... i like the lighting :D
noruazumi
05-29-2007, 10:05 AM
i really like the concept.
if this is the angle, should focus on the hand to emphasise more on the praying.
good job with the lighting.
if you got the time, please share with us the color version.
i just think the color version would be more interesting.
good goody job! :D
galee
05-29-2007, 01:02 PM
:) very nice... The room seems like in my apartment's suana room.
stockie
05-29-2007, 02:01 PM
Simple and convincing! I like it.
ShaolinTiger
05-29-2007, 02:02 PM
I like it, the use of light is good, the frame is too thick IMHO though.
ZzkAng
05-29-2007, 09:02 PM
nice b/w there....but the compo...if you crop the boy to the lower left side...i think the image will be nicer.. :)
draeger
05-30-2007, 12:00 AM
He seems to be praying in front of an altar. Maybe you should have included a bit of the altar? Or is there no altar?
I wish I could but the place is too tight.
A part from that, I find the bit above his head distracting. You should crop it away.
I tried doing that but i wasn't doing a good job with it. Looked too fake for me. PP skill not good enough...
I like it, the play of light, shadows, detail.
Looks like sharpest point is his neck. How is the light coming from top right?
Alan's suggestion emphasises focus on the boy, which is good.
Were you able to get a slightly more frontal shot?
Thanks, I will try a different location next time. A bit difficult to do a frontal shot in this place. But good suggestion, thanks!
compo aside... i like the lighting :D
Thanks qqmeng.
i really like the concept.
if this is the angle, should focus on the hand to emphasise more on the praying.
good job with the lighting.
if you got the time, please share with us the color version.
i just think the color version would be more interesting.
good goody job! :D
That's a good suggestion, thanks! :)
:) very nice... The room seems like in my apartment's suana room.
Oooh, lucky you got sauna... :) Thanks.
Simple and convincing! I like it.
Thanks stockie. :)
I like it, the use of light is good, the frame is too thick IMHO though.
Hehe..thanks boss. I'm gonna stick with the thick frame for the moment for uniformity. Thanks anyway.
nice b/w there....but the compo...if you crop the boy to the lower left side...i think the image will be nicer.. :)
Thanks, i'll try to do that next time.
Thanks guys for all your constructive comments. You've been very helpful. :D
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