Renee | Photo By HuaHeRO

[HuaHeRO]

Hi ...
Dear all sifu here , pls feel free to giv a comment .. Tq:P

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[liewwk]

I am newbies in portrait .. but
this pictures are NICE ..

#4 & 5 are GOOD

[duke916]

Great vivid color!!

[xavierchan]

overall looks GREAT man! I love your set!

[orangutan]

not bad...i wish i can take pic like u...:adore:

[Peisqo]

I've learnt not to have horizons cutting the head .. not sure if it applies to you in 4 and 5 tho :P I like #3 ~!! Cute model .. look like Charmaine Sheh :run_away:

[ShaolinTiger]

Just my 2 cents, WB/skin tone is a bit inconsistent between pics. Looks like you've mixed ambient and flash - try and maintain same colour temp (you may have to gel the flash if you are using one).

#1 the composition is a bit akward, too much pole and not enough girl, should show all of her baju and less of the tiang.

#2 nice shot, but it could be more symmetrical - it's not perfectly central but it's not far enough to the side to be offset.

#3 is best shot for me if the model expression is better and you tidied up her hair.

#4 & #5 are nice but too similar, her feet/toe position is a bit odd too.

[astroboy]

The model is so kawai...i think it's hard to take a bad shot. All nice. :)

[HuaHeRO]

I am newbies in portrait .. but
this pictures are NICE ..

#4 & 5 are GOOD

haha .. thanks for viewing ..

Great vivid color!!

Thanks Duke ,i like the color also ..

overall looks GREAT man! I love your set!

Thanks man ..

not bad...i wish i can take pic like u...:adore:

u sure can do it .. i just a newbies here .. we learn together ...


I've learnt not to have horizons cutting the head .. not sure if it applies to you in 4 and 5 tho :P I like #3 ~!! Cute model .. look like Charmaine Sheh :run_away:

haha .. yalo ..she realy look like Charmaine Sheh ..hehe .. Leng Lui .


Just my 2 cents, WB/skin tone is a bit inconsistent between pics. Looks like you've mixed ambient and flash - try and maintain same colour temp (you may have to gel the flash if you are using one).

#1 the composition is a bit akward, too much pole and not enough girl, should show all of her baju and less of the tiang.

#2 nice shot, but it could be more symmetrical - it's not perfectly central but it's not far enough to the side to be offset.

#3 is best shot for me if the model expression is better and you tidied up her hair.

#4 & #5 are nice but too similar, her feet/toe position is a bit odd too.

Thanks ShaolinTiger .. u always giv a very good comment ..will try to improve it ...

The model is so kawai...i think it's hard to take a bad shot. All nice. :)

Yalo .. u r correct .. she very cute ..

[myjunk_]

#3 is the best composition wise. Should move more towards the right so it looks like she's looking at something

[HuaHeRO]

#3 is the best composition wise. Should move more towards the right so it looks like she's looking at something

Thanks for viewing my pic and the advise ... :)

[myjunk_]

Thanks for viewing my pic and the advise ... :)


That's just IMHO lah.

I also noob.

[kalvinkhoo]

Hi,
i like ur set all the colour and lighting very nice~ ;);)

[Vince C]

HuaHeRo, I like your composition and the colours.
For photo #1, if you can eliminate the empty space of left-lower-corner and cover fully with the pile, I think it looks better.

[HuaHeRO]

Hi,
i like ur set all the colour and lighting very nice~ ;);)

tQ .. will post more for comment

HuaHeRo, I like your composition and the colours.
For photo #1, if you can eliminate the empty space of left-lower-corner and cover fully with the pile, I think it looks better.

Haha .. tq .. will take note about this ..

[HuaHeRO]

1 more cute shoot .. enjoy ..:D

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[aming]

what i want to say has been voiced by other forumer...

she is lovely!!!

[wuushin]

Nice. Great improvement compare to last post. Why u didnt invite me????

[bcteh]

Color and sharpness can be improve.

Try to shoot more close-up.

[Zhang]

I found one thing, if green plants r to be the bg, it 's always distracting, no matter how the dof.
As shalin tiger said, some flaw r there.

[HuaHeRO]

what i want to say has been voiced by other forumer...

she is lovely!!!

ya .. she is very lovely , thanks for viewing ..

Nice. Great improvement compare to last post. Why u didnt invite me????

haha .. wuushin , happy to heard tat ur comment , okok u PM me ur contact .. will invite u next coming shooting.. hehe

Color and sharpness can be improve.

Try to shoot more close-up.

I found one thing, if green plants r to be the bg, it 's always distracting, no matter how the dof.
As shalin tiger said, some flaw r there.


thanks for Zhang & bcteh comment , i'm still new in photography and just start learning , next shooting will try shoot more close up photo ...