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zeinchang
06-27-2008, 03:28 AM
My First on portraits, shot taken with my Canon 400D and f1.8 50mm.C&C welcome.
http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l176/einchang/Shooting/IMG_1275Custom.jpg

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l176/einchang/Shooting/IMG_1568Custom.jpg
zamrudku
06-27-2008, 07:03 AM
Learn more about combination, mixing and matcing of colours in ur pics. In the first pic the foreground is not blurred enuf to differentiate the main object.

My 2 kupang.
zeinchang
06-27-2008, 07:35 AM
thx man,will try my best
jayhan
06-27-2008, 07:43 AM
pic 2 - tong sampah also included into the pic??!! careful with composition.
pic 1 - while the subject in focus is the heart shape pillow, you need to be careful with lightfall... the pillow front is already in the shadowed area.
EdwinTan
06-27-2008, 08:32 AM
#1 - underexpose
zamrudku
06-27-2008, 09:33 AM
pic 2 - tong sampah also included into the pic??!! careful with composition.
pic 1 - while the subject in focus is the heart shape pillow, you need to be careful with lightfall... the pillow front is already in the shadowed area.
Agree with Jay...maybe next time u would want her to face the light source...so as to have more control of the lighting.....thus not having underexpose or light fall off.
edward chan
06-27-2008, 10:19 AM
number your photos too
desaintlights
06-27-2008, 10:52 AM
you are quite creative on your first try on portrait....

shoot more.... good effort, but some more practice and you'll be good :)
Swift3230
06-27-2008, 09:05 PM
yaya.....more practise when u free, shoot more objects, more portrait & learn more from the SA members....good try anyway
myjunk_
06-27-2008, 09:24 PM
I believe pics were not taken with flash, hence the lightfall on the pillow is irregular?
zamrudku
06-28-2008, 01:54 AM
I believe pics were not taken with flash, hence the lightfall on the pillow is irregular?
Even though not using flash.....it shouldn't be an excuse for the the light fall off. Heard of a reflector? Or shooting from an another angle?
zeinchang
06-29-2008, 12:35 AM
I believe pics were not taken with flash, hence the lightfall on the pillow is irregular?

yup,its without flash..
thx and very appreciated your all comment..
hmn..i have to do more pratice ;)