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stephen325
08-04-2008, 02:38 PM
This shot was taken right after heavy rain yeaterday at my friend's garden.
C&C welcome.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3026/2731277772_1a0887686d_o.jpg

Thanks for viewing.
kingfisher
08-04-2008, 03:51 PM
Nice saturation. Natural lighting?
If emphasize on the dews would it be better? Just my thaught.
noordin
08-04-2008, 04:14 PM
You've lost the details in the hot spots. Otherwise this would have been great.
stephen325
08-04-2008, 05:41 PM
Nice saturation. Natural lighting?
If emphasize on the dews would it be better? Just my thaught.

Dear Kingfisher,
I also think the same, still learning to use my new lens. Thanks anyway.

You've lost the details in the hot spots. Otherwise this would have been great.

Dear Noordin,
Thanks for your comment. I shall take note of it during my next shoot.
orionmystery
08-04-2008, 06:25 PM
I think composition could be better. You also clipped part of the green thingies on the lower part of the hibiscus. Lots of noise too. Could use more DOF to keep the whole flower in focus.
stephen325
08-04-2008, 09:18 PM
I think composition could be better. You also clipped part of the green thingies on the lower part of the hibiscus. Lots of noise too. Could use more DOF to keep the whole flower in focus.

Dear orionmystery,:P
Thanks for your details comments, its valuable to me. ;)