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jonjon
07-17-2007, 09:00 PM
The Heritage....
1.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0283edit1.jpg
2.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0287edit1.jpg
3.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0294edit1.jpg
4.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0385edit1.jpg
5.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0388edit1.jpg
Fishhook
07-17-2007, 09:03 PM
from what i hear those old school may have problem with your slanting shots n also they way u crop. less finger n so on. but for me its nice pics:D
limgt
07-17-2007, 10:57 PM
I think #4 is over slanted. The rest are quite good.
macnpalm
07-18-2007, 08:53 AM
i like the way your photos are slanted though not #4 as previously stated, it's too slanted... overall... nicely thought photos...
alancheong7
07-18-2007, 10:08 AM
#1, #3, #5 :thumbs_up:
#4 the rental/sale sign and distortion ...
csjian
07-18-2007, 09:43 PM
i like the idea of #1.
not sure i m right or not...ppl was not sharp right?
jonjon
07-18-2007, 10:39 PM
pic #1 is taken this way i never crop it
jonjon
07-18-2007, 10:44 PM
The Garden
7.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0504edit1.jpg
8.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0492edit1.jpg
Louis Pang
07-19-2007, 03:27 PM
The Heritage....
1.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0283edit1.jpg
My eyes keep wondering from the flower to the dirty gate. Not sure this composition works.
2.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0287edit1.jpg
It is not symmetrical and the electric meter is a HUGE distraction on top of the groom's head. Shoot is straight on with the arch in the middle. It would be different.
3.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0294edit1.jpg
Go tighter to show the couple with the arch only. The cable and the dirty railings on top is a distraction.
4.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0385edit1.jpg
5.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g252/jonathan_yyc/IMG_0388edit1.jpg
The tilting doesn't work for me in the last two pix.
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