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scott
04-08-2007, 12:26 AM
Hi All

Please feel free to comment on these. They were taken in Bali last year.

1. Relaxed...
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2. Ant on the edge of a tomato sauce ocean
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3. Frangi's
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4. Stone ornament
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Cheers

Scott

ckchowov
04-09-2007, 08:48 AM
#3. Don't crop away the flower petal.

ShaolinTiger
04-09-2007, 09:05 AM
#1 is a bit washed out and has some overexposed regions, especially for the mood of the picture I think it would be a bit better muted, perhaps slightly underexposed. I like the composition.

#2 The composition is a little central, I'd like to see the ant on the right hand side of the frame crawling into the sauce.

#3 Agree with chow, it's a well exposed and sharp pic but it's a shame you clipped the edges of the petals.

#4 Depth of Field is a little narrow for me and slightly off the eye, could use a little more contrast too.

Just my thoughts ;)

scott
04-09-2007, 08:43 PM
Guys

Thanks for taking the time to have a good look at my post and for your thoughtful feedback.

Cheers

Scott