virgin shoot

[siokae0422]

my virgin shoot for wedding ceremony
C&C are welcome
my fren sister become white mouse for me, haha
thanks for giving me this chance to learn more

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/killer81/t1.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/killer81/t11.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/killer81/t12.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/killer81/t13.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/killer81/t14.jpg

[noruazumi]

for a "virgin", these shots are slightly above average, i mean quite ok for a "virgin". :)
some of the shots were a bit underexposed which can be easily fixed using photoshop.
i'm sure with a little more practice, you'll be fine! :)

[jayhan]

looks ok to me to be honest.
but yeah agree with zumi on the underexp shots

[karheng]

I duno why all that dressy fingernails when they're supposed to look elegant in the wedding dress...I personallly don't find it very appealing,...but your shots are Ok!

[mki88]

Hey not bad at all.

IMO, for the 4#, I personally prefer the focus to be on the bride face which shows more detail rather than just the plain face of the bridegroom.

For the last shot, the composition is good but it leads too much empty space at the top.

Overall, u have done a good job and I believe your friend's sister is happy with the photos. :)

[jmaguireokm]

for a "virgin" shoot, it's a good results already lo
agree with noru and ah jay, most of the photos is underexpo

u can learn from ah jay kekekekekekeke

[funkiller]

Nice !

I think for #3, the focus should be at the face of the bride, rather focus on the flower....

[siokae0422]

okok, thanks for many comment
i will practice more to get improvement
really thanks a lot

[noordin]

If this is really your first time, then you're on your way! Good work.

[singkong]

Zumi and Jayhan

Pardon my ignorance, still new and learning photography. My learning eye say the photos looks ok, which part do your comment the underexposed happen. This is question to learn from a fellow photog experiance/works.

[mki88]

Eh actually I'm not sure about the underexposure problem. To me, the first shot looks abit overexposed, as u can see the white has blown out.

For the other shots, I've check them in Photoshop, and the histogram shows me that the shots are well exposed. In my monitor, the shots looks balancely exposed to me.

[karheng]

I agree the photos are underexposed, except the 1st. Mki88, time to calibrate! hehehehe :D