DreaMmmm.

[greEn-V]

Have no experience at all about taking such photo.
Fortunately, it still turn up ok.
C & C please... :)
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[qqmeng]

brighter ll be better i think

[Crazymalaysian]

And to me there seems to be way too much empty white space. Image also seems a bit soft, try a little smart sharpen or unsharp mask in photoshop.

[alancheong7]

Just shoot, trying out or intend to convey something?

Depending on the above - tighter crop, differing background colours, at least one other item for contrast, some shadows would help.

[greEn-V]

And to me there seems to be way too much empty white space. Image also seems a bit soft, try a little smart sharpen or unsharp mask in photoshop.

Thanks for the tips.

brighter ll be better i think

Maybe... :D

[mospeada]

I suggest write some italics wording or some pencil drawing, make it more attractive.....and i thk the DOF more attractive......

[jayhan]

i'll try something similar tonight since I have loads of pencils at home... heheh
can i then post it up here instead of opening a new thread??

[noordin]

I like the empty space and the shallow DOF. This is an image not so much a photo of a pencil so the empty space works. But the focal point of the whole image is the tip of the pencil and that needs to be pin sharp. But it's not. Pity.

[ckchowov]

More pencils please.

[greEn-V]

Waiting for more .