Little girl in a Banjar

[elrondii]

This girl was immensely giving her full concentration on the story told by the head of the banjar in Ubud. Comments are welcome! (i did not even use RAW taking this picture ... coz i don't know what raw is hahaha!!)

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[alancheong7]

Beautiful take, but her face burned a bit liao :redface:


PS You a LOTR fan? :D

[blur]

I like how the lighting is concentrated on her, with the surrounding darker. But the composition could be done better. Give more empty space on the left as to where she's looking.

[mobbes]

Good expression :) Agree with blur about space to look into ... that'd also mean putting here into the right third of the frame. btw what photo editing prog you using? Looks like you created the "spotlight" on her face by darkening the rest of the pic

[elrondii]

allan: yeah i guess a bit over exposed on the face .. thanks

blur and mobbes : yeah should have some space on the side where she's looking. Yeah i did photoedited it using elements. Taking photo is fun ... so is editing it!