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behyc
12-04-2007, 11:29 PM
I'm new in photography and tryin out some shots was hoping the guru' in SA could C&C...:redface:
noruazumi
12-05-2007, 12:20 AM
if it doesn't cost u a lot of trouble, can u attach the photos into the thread rather than give links to view it? :redface:
behyc
12-05-2007, 01:41 AM
Done...:redface:
mki88
12-05-2007, 02:32 AM
Good photos. I especially like the zooming effect. Very accurately done.
takader_lagi
12-05-2007, 03:11 PM
nice capture bro especially #2 & #3
JackJack
12-05-2007, 03:17 PM
lighting for #1 can be better

#2 very creative and #3 is just nice
behyc
12-05-2007, 03:52 PM
mki88, takader_lagi & JackJack...thanks for the comments...
henrychiah
12-05-2007, 04:23 PM
nice and good try
behyc
12-06-2007, 09:04 AM
nice and good try

Thanks henrychiah...:)
noruazumi
12-06-2007, 09:15 AM
#1: cute soft toy u got there. a very big eye. what i would do is take a closer shot, focus in the eye and use f/1.8 to make the DOF shallow as the rest of the toy's part don't have any interesting details to show. a tighter composition would be better as there are too much negative spaces in the photo.

#2: not really much i can say here as it is an abstract shot. however, it is a clean zoom-shot. try also spinning your camera to make the background twirl. another popular technique that people use.

#3: this is a great shot. the crop and the exposures are just spot on! but again, it the future, u can also incorporate the sunset color with some silhouette of people, buildings, boats or any subjects to give more expressive shots.

hope i didn't bore you with my words. :D
behyc
12-06-2007, 10:01 AM
#1: cute soft toy u got there. a very big eye. what i would do is take a closer shot, focus in the eye and use f/1.8 to make the DOF shallow as the rest of the toy's part don't have any interesting details to show. a tighter composition would be better as there are too much negative spaces in the photo.

#2: not really much i can say here as it is an abstract shot. however, it is a clean zoom-shot. try also spinning your camera to make the background twirl. another popular technique that people use.

#3: this is a great shot. the crop and the exposures are just spot on! but again, it the future, u can also incorporate the sunset color with some silhouette of people, buildings, boats or any subjects to give more expressive shots.

hope i didn't bore you with my words. :D

Really appreciate your C&C :worship:, will take note of the tips in future...:azz: