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yannick
03-15-2007, 11:14 AM
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/5131/110bo2.jpg

Please critic this putrajaya landscape pic...i wan to know how you all think. thank you. Just bang only no need give face one lol

Gojira
03-15-2007, 11:21 AM
Bang! :D

Err...what can I say? I like the overall effect especially the reflection in the water....oh yeah, can see some fence posts on the left side....maybe can PS those out...spoils the look a bit. Maybe can also PS the clouds to make them more dramatic....can someone comment on how to do this? I'm sure I saw it mentioned somewhere in one of the local photography magazines...

siew
03-15-2007, 11:22 AM
Nice comp. Maybe need somes levels adj. to bring the colors out.

Would be even better if the building is lighted but I know this is beyond your control.

JackJack
03-15-2007, 11:23 AM
senget abit:?

ShaolinTiger
03-15-2007, 11:30 AM
Looks slightly senget or perhaps it's barrel distortion. The colour is nice, but I find it a bit too dark, underexposed by 0.33-0.66ev or so.

Perhaps pull out the shadows a little bit, I do like the silhouette effect though :)

yannick
03-16-2007, 09:22 AM
Bang! :D

Err...what can I say? I like the overall effect especially the reflection in the water....oh yeah, can see some fence posts on the left side....maybe can PS those out...spoils the look a bit. Maybe can also PS the clouds to make them more dramatic....can someone comment on how to do this? I'm sure I saw it mentioned somewhere in one of the local photography magazines...

thank you gojira, ya..i also find the clouds is not dramatic enough...

Nice comp. Maybe need somes levels adj. to bring the colors out.

Would be even better if the building is lighted but I know this is beyond your control.

thks for the comment, tat time is about 6.45am. there is no light at tat moment so the building looks dark.

senget abit:?

senget ka? lol

Looks slightly senget or perhaps it's barrel distortion. The colour is nice, but I find it a bit too dark, underexposed by 0.33-0.66ev or so.

Perhaps pull out the shadows a little bit, I do like the silhouette effect though :)

thank you for the comment. ya..i think also a bit too dark, yeah.

ckchowov
03-16-2007, 03:38 PM
What focal length did u used ? U can try again with 35mm...sure different.

qqmeng
03-19-2007, 02:34 PM
yannick r u doing silhouette? if not... maybe u should consider HRD..:D