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Sultan Abu Bakar Mosque, JB
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#2
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tashy, park it under critiques forum for serious comments.
shall I move it ? ![]() |
#3
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Critique is limited to one photo, can give gentle C&C here
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#4
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Thanks for putting the piccies in line, ST. (I've been having problems doing that since this morning. Is there a shortcut?)
Since Critiques is only for one piccy, you all can belasah these ones right here. |
#5
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Hmm....should crop out the right side of the 1st photo...part of a building still visible and makes the overall photo seem senget. The thin pole is also annoying.
You might want to boost the colour saturation for all the photos to make them "pop"...but then again, that's just my personal taste. |
#6
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the 1st photo...
what are those stuff on the right of the photo? windows frame? ![]()
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#7
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watch ur horizontal line in ur pics... a bit slanted...
Also looks slightly underexposed? Maybe the white building fooling ur sensor. Colours a bit muted.. maybe saturate them a bit in PS... ![]() |
#8
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Yah I also find them a bit underexposed and lacking contrast and saturation.
Perhaps post your favourite one in the Fix It forum and we'll see what we can do!
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#9
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Yo guys thanks for your input. That ain't no window frame but I don't remember what it was...another pole probably. I tend to take senget pics because I have senget eyes (juling lah). This is my first attempt at not PS-ing my pics because I wanted to see how people would react to them raw. Well I know now.
![]() I will select one of my other pics to post in Critique because this set got its intended result. Cheers! |
#10
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Poor lighting for #1 and #4. #2 is good if the little fountain is not dead. #3 the flag on the right 'kacau' the building.
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