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Old 09-02-2010, 01:17 PM
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First picture from beginner

D90 standard kapak.



CC welcome.


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Old 09-02-2010, 01:33 PM
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Very good shots.

I don't quite like the composition of the first one, but I do like the high-key exposure.

3rd and 4th shots are too similar.

But 2nd and 3rd shots are superb!
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Old 09-03-2010, 11:49 AM
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imho, (it might be my monitor) the first photo is not sharp. one eye is almost sharp tho.

did you have one photo of the baby smiling or giving you eye contact maybe? (i would have love to seen that)
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Old 09-04-2010, 05:45 AM
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imho, (it might be my monitor) the first photo is not sharp. one eye is almost sharp tho.

did you have one photo of the baby smiling or giving you eye contact maybe? (i would have love to seen that)
That not your monitor bro . yes only one eye is sharp (but no sharp enough he.he). i using 50mm F1.8.
first time bro.. difficult to shoot baby need to practice using DSLR.
my baby not always looking at my camera..

Anyway thanks for CC.
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Old 09-05-2010, 09:04 PM
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Love that CANDID feel of #4~!

A fuller framing of her whole body will make more sense though - just my RM0.02
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Old 09-14-2010, 11:22 AM
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Love that CANDID feel of #4~!

A fuller framing of her whole body will make more sense though - just my RM0.02
thanks bro.
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Old 09-14-2010, 11:31 AM
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Nice try, learn more on Rule of third (RO3) for better composition and try to get full framing of the subject.
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Old 09-15-2010, 09:47 AM
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Nice try, learn more on Rule of third (RO3) for better composition and try to get full framing of the subject.
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bro superb shot keep it..........
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imo the red crocs on #4 is a little distracting.. love the high key feel on #1 =)
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