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Old 01-30-2008, 10:20 PM
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Model Lu | Photo by smokio

Below is my frist studio potrait shot.Please comment as well.thanks
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Old 01-31-2008, 12:04 AM
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I would retain the top half and ditch the bottom to obtain overall balance.

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Old 01-31-2008, 09:13 AM
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model gua?

btw i think you didn't clean the white properly. i can still see the dirt around her like a "dirt halo"
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Old 01-31-2008, 10:29 AM
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great capture. prefer to make it 2 photos, composition a little weird and not balance. just my 2 cents.
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Old 01-31-2008, 12:01 PM
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thank you guys,i will take note.
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Old 01-31-2008, 03:09 PM
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so clean... i like.. nice layout.
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Old 02-02-2008, 05:02 PM
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Lu1.jpg

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Old 02-02-2008, 05:33 PM
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Quite an improvement on layout as compared to the 1st posting! Kudos!
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cicak women...

just kidding...
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