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Old 04-10-2007, 09:55 AM
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what's wrong with my burger?

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i feel something wrong with the picture, but cant tell what is it? the color?
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Old 04-10-2007, 10:02 AM
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i think is the white background
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Old 04-10-2007, 10:43 AM
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The only thing that is so wrong about this shot is that it is so freakin tempting that it keeps me awake until now just to stare at it and salivate.
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Old 04-10-2007, 10:47 AM
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i feel something wrong with the picture, but cant tell what is it? the color?
Yeah I agree with qqmeng, should pose it against a darker background and also use a higher f stop.
You might also want to tidy up the burger for better compo
...Looking at it sort of make me hungry now.....must.... resist.... urge....
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Old 04-10-2007, 11:14 AM
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The only thing that is so wrong about this shot is that it is so freakin tempting that it keeps me awake until now just to stare at it and salivate.
Hahahah same here bro... i telan air liur so many times man.
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Old 04-10-2007, 11:28 AM
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look at the melted cheese!!! aaaaaaaaaaaa...
about the photo, i think lack of color variations, that's why it looks dull eventho the burger looks delicious! hehe.
no salad ar? hehe.
if i'm not mistaken, this is a "street" burger right?
if it is, i think it'll looks better if u shoot the burger with the wrapper.
and slightly lowering f-value could improve it (f/3.5 would do i think).
that's all i can think of... but the burger with melted chese? waaaahh... *nose bleed*
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Old 04-10-2007, 11:29 AM
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yes the colour is not right bcos it doesnt have overflowing ketchup and chilli sauce!
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Old 04-10-2007, 11:41 AM
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i think is the white background
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Yeah I agree with qqmeng, should pose it against a darker background and also use a higher f stop.
You might also want to tidy up the burger for better compo
...Looking at it sort of make me hungry now.....must.... resist.... urge....
LOL! no time to setup the background la, fast fast unwrap with some effort of arranging the wrapping paper, then take picture, and eat liao. I worry it will become cold so i off the fan some more, sweat like hell....LOL!

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The only thing that is so wrong about this shot is that it is so freakin tempting that it keeps me awake until now just to stare at it and salivate.
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Hahahah same here bro... i telan air liur so many times man.
hmmm....This shud be good

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look at the melted cheese!!! aaaaaaaaaaaa...
about the photo, i think lack of color variations, that's why it looks dull eventho the burger looks delicious! hehe.
no salad ar? hehe.
if i'm not mistaken, this is a "street" burger right?
if it is, i think it'll looks better if u shoot the burger with the wrapper.
and slightly lowering f-value could improve it (f/3.5 would do i think).
that's all i can think of... but the burger with melted chese? waaaahh... *nose bleed*

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yes the colour is not right bcos it doesnt have overflowing ketchup and chilli sauce!
yup azumin, tat's street burger, everyone favorite

ya...and the color of green vege is missing...
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It seems a tad underexposed, especially the front part! Probably some fixing with the levels will help?

But the egg and melted cheese are so tempting *drooling*
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Old 04-10-2007, 12:56 PM
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Ramli s burger is anytime better than those McD ......

Boss Mayonnaise banyak sikit ok?!
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